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tommy
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I like the composition of this picture. I interpret it as the girl in the add is stealing the boy from the other girl, which could be generalized to the pressure on women caused by exaggerated ideals in advertisements. But I wonder about the framing. There is a lot of hair from the add girl in the picture, and that vast "empty" space makes the picture strange to look at for me. It also causes the picture to be very statically divided at the center, with the add to the left and the couple and buildings on the right. By cropping away some of the hair, to place the line between the add girl's lips and the boy on a third, and the line between the couple in the center, I think the picture will get much more tension, although I haven't tried it (I'm stuck with a sunky laptop).